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Old 06-18-2012, 02:42 PM   #1
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Hi, here's a book I wrote. Here's the prologue (the words are smashed together because I copied it off of Microsoft word):


I walked alongside the street of our neighborhood. “Hey,Lily, come here!” a voice shouted. I turned around and saw my best friend,Chris, calling to me from his backyard. I glanced at my watch, which indicatedit was nine o’clock in the morning, and rushed off to his fence.

Iclimbed over Chris’s fence. “Hey, how are you today?” Chris asked. “I’m prettygood, thanks. What about you?” I asked. “I’m great. Let’s go to the treehouse!” Chris said, running to the tree house in his backyard. A tree housemight seem like something for younger children, but I suppose we’re weirdteenagers. This probably sounds very childish, but the tree house feelsmagical. We can do anything we want in there. It gives us an enchanted feeling.

Ilaughed, thinking of how Chris had sounded like a five year old, and climbed upthe rope ladder to the tree house. “What were you laughing about?” Chris asked.“Well—to be honest, you sounded like a little boy,” I told him. “When and how?”Chris asked. “When you said ‘let’s go to the tree house’ it sounded likesomething very…childish,” I told him. He laughed and grabbed his sketchpad fromthe tree house’s wooden shelf. Pulling a pencil from his pocket, he began todraw.

“What’reyou drawing?” I asked. “Um—nothing,” he said, trying to hide his work. However,I leaned over and caught a glimpse of what he was drawing.

“Chris,why would you draw that?” I asked, laughing. He’d drawn a picture of a cat withdevil horns. “Err…” he said, his cheeks turning red as tomatoes. “Chris, I lovethe way you draw those random things,” I said, tears coming to my eyes from thejoy of laughing. He smiled. “Well, that’s just me,” he said. Suddenly I heard anoise—a bit like thunder—and the next thing I knew Chris and I were yelping. Adark sort of smoke came into the tree house. Chris climbed down from it.However, when he looked back up, I was still in the tree house.

“Lily,come on! Hurry!” he yelled at me. I scrambled to get down the rope ladder, butit was too late. The low noise nearly blasted my ears and the dark smoke-likestuff was all around me. I fell to the floor of the tree house, unconscious.


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Old 06-18-2012, 04:05 PM   #2
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Ooh this is exciting!
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Old 06-18-2012, 04:33 PM   #3
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OK, Catlover200710 is on the vm list! Thank you for commenting
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