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Old 03-07-2009, 08:27 AM   #1
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Thumbs up Happening to me Book One~ when a girls best friends parents get kiddnapped its up to Ellie and Baliy to find them will they? CHAPTER 5 AND 6 ARE UP!!!!BOOK 2 COMING SOON!

Happening To Me
Chapter One
"How did I get this grade?" I said.
"Well maybe she made a mistake?" Baliey said.
" I will go talk to her!" I ran back to the class room to go and tell Mrs. Helmkamp.
" Yes may I help you Ellie?" Mrs. Helmkamp asked
" Yes I have a question about my test."
" OK I will check over tonight go home now ok?" I ran out of school waiting for the bus when I saw Kaliy getting bullied by Talyor and Amy.
" Please just leave me alone!" Kaliy yelled
" Why should we?" Talyor and Amy said.
" Guys just go away!" I yelled. Talor and Amy left.
" Are you ok, Kaliy?"
" Yeah Im fine thanks Ellie!"

Chapter Two
I ran home I always come home to an emty house because my parents work late.
" Baliey! What are you doing here?" I asked
" Someone kiddnapped my parents!" Baliey had wet eyes and still crying. I hugged her and said " Listen we will find your parents!"
" How Ellie? The police are already on the case."
" Just trust me on this! Here how about we get something to eat?" We went to the kichten and got us some snacks
" I sure hope we can come up with a plan!"


CHAPTER 3 AND 4 COMING SOON!!!!!



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Old 03-07-2009, 08:32 AM   #2
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I love it so far, could you make the chappies a little longer so it will hold reader's interest longer? That's just my opinion.
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Old 03-07-2009, 09:06 AM   #3
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Default Re: Happening to me Book One~ when a girls best friends parents get kiddnapped its up to Ellie and Baliy to find them will they?

ok sure! thanks!!

---------- kirbyawsome added 18 Minutes and 12 Seconds later ----------

CHAPTER 3
At home me and Baliy were tring to figure out a plan when the perfect idea came to our heads!
" Ok here is the plan, we will use some of this spy gear I got for Christmas!"
" How is that going to help Ellie?"
" Well the stuff works so we can use it!" Me and Baliy left the house ready to start I took out my spy gear and Baliy haned me some of her parents hair. I put put the hair into my spy thingy amd looked around to get a signal.
" Ok they are 15 miles away and it gives me the adress!!" My mom came home and we explained everything she took us to her car.
" Ok kids let me see it." my mom said. I handed it over as she looked st it.
" Kids, this says 15 hours from here!" my mom yelled.
" Opps sorry mom!"
" Well then lets get to the air port!

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Old 03-07-2009, 01:49 PM   #4
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Cool! I love it so far!
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Old 03-08-2009, 06:56 PM   #5
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Default Re: Happening to me Book One~ when a girls best friends parents get kiddnapped its up to Ellie and Baliy to find them will they?

CHAPTER 4
We were on the plane we were going over to LA but until suddleny crashed!
" HELP HELP!!!!" I yelled I was stuck underneath the plane any longer and I could of suffacated.
" I coming Ellie!" Baliy yelled helping me out we were all very hurt.
"MOM?" I yelled but no anwser.
" Ellie I think your mom id dead." Baliy said in a quiet voice. I started to cry but I had to keep going.
" All right but we have to keep going." I said
" Right we have to find my mom and dad!" We were the only ones that made it so no one was there to be with us but it looked like we where in Utah. Closer then you would think to LA.
" How are we going to get there now?" asked Baliy
" I dont know but its going to be tough."

---------- kirbyawsome added 470 Minutes and 55 Seconds later ----------

CHAPTER 5
" Hey get in the van!" A man said
" What was that asked Baliey
" I dont know and I dont want to figure in out ethier." I said
" Wait!" Baliey yelled" They were here!"
" Who?"
" My parents! Listen!"
" Please why do you want us?" Balieys mom said
" Just get in the van!" the man yelled.
" MOM!!" Baliey yelled.
" BALIEY?" I came out and grabbed Baliey she souldnt have said that. The guys started to chase us.
" RUN BALIEY!" I yelled as we were running. I soon got out a smoke bomb and through it behind us to slow them down so we can get to the police station.
" Baliey are you there?"
" Yes im here with my parents!"
" ARE YOU ALRIGHT ELLIE?" Balieys mom saw a bullet in my arm.
" No"


CHAPTER 6
At the Hospitial I woke up with no bullet in my arm.
" Hey she woke up!' Baliey said.
" Why did you take me here? And did those guys get arrested?" I asked
" Of course they did! And the least we can do is get you better since you saved us!" Baliys mom said
"And since your mom died you can stay with us!" Balieys dad said.
" Thank you!"
I do know that my life will change from now on this was very fun and challenging but I could save anyone if I just belive. And this wasent a dream it was happeing to me.

THANKS FOR READING! book 2 will come out soon!

---------- kirbyawsome added 125 Minutes and 14 Seconds later ----------

if 30 people veiw this thread then i will start book two!!! 6 more people!!!

---------- kirbyawsome added 25 Minutes and 18 Seconds later ----------

yes!!! 4 more people

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Old 03-08-2009, 07:10 PM   #6
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AWESOME!! whats book 2 gonna be about?? omg!
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Old 03-08-2009, 07:12 PM   #7
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Default Re: Happening to me Book One~ when a girls best friends parents get kiddnapped its up to Ellie and Baliy to find them will they? CHAPTER 5 AND 6 ARE UP!!!!BOOK 2 COMING SOON!

it will be soon!!
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Old 03-08-2009, 07:40 PM   #8
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I like it! But could you make it a little more discriptive and the chapters a little longer?
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Old 03-11-2009, 04:34 PM   #9
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Default Re: Happening to me Book One~ when a girls best friends parents get kiddnapped its up to Ellie and Baliy to find them will they? CHAPTER 5 AND 6 ARE UP!!!!BOOK 2 COMING SOON!

I LUV THIS BOOK!!!plz plz plz post Happening to Me,Book 2 RIGHT NOW!!!!plz its great!WI Bucks for u!and rep.
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