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Old 07-26-2008, 09:14 PM   #1
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Post The DT Expedition Chronichles! Book One, All These Lives! Come look!

Hello, this is KOP, with a new story! It is called the DT Expedition Chronichles!
Whoops sorry! Jusrt a keyboard error. It is under construction. It will be up soon.
This is all fake. The info is not real. It is not my real name or age.
Intro:
I am Jake Raspro, a 14 year old boy. I am in the 9th grade, and I go to Miami High School. This is the story about an expedition, with tragedy, secrets, happiness, sadness, and relief. Enjoy.
Chapter One: The start of a new Legend
Bam! I heard the crack of a gun, and the thump of a deer. Gee, the neighbors are hunting again. Man, it's so annoying! I woke up, and went downstairs for breakfast. "Mornin son!" My dad said. "good morning dad." I said with happiness. I ate a quick bowl of cereal, and ran upstairs to change. "What's the rush son?" My dad asked me. I looked back. "You don't know what day it is?" I said to him. "It's my friends B-day! His party is gonna be rockin!" "Oh." He said. I changed into my football shirt, put on my baseball cap, some socks and shoes, got packed for school, and ran to the bus stop. "Bye dad!" I said. "Bye son! Have a nice day at school!" He said. But yet I didn't know what would be stalking at my high school.
Hope you enjoyed the first chapter! Tune in for chapters 2 and 3 tomorrow! Comments and ratings are appreciated.

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Old 07-28-2008, 02:52 PM   #2
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Post Re: The DT Expedition Chronichles! Book One, All These Lives! Come look!

Here is chapter 2!
Chapter 2: The school shooting
I got off the bus. Put my books in my locker, grabbed the things i needed, and ran to science class. "Oh great, discection again." I thought to myself. After that, I headed to Algebra. "Well, here is something good." I thought. I headed to History, then math, then music, and so on. and just before I went to gym, the bell rang. The announcement said that we needded to evacuate. I dunno why. Just as I was about to exit, I heard the crack of a gun. "That's why!" I said. I looked back, and I saw horror at it's greatest.
Tune in for chapter 3 later!
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