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Old 05-11-2008, 10:44 AM   #21
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Chapter 7

''Everybody hide!" Danielle whispered. She went up to the ceiling with Jake and Cody while Maggie hid behind a chest. Sarah hid in a drawer, being super skinny. Drew and Matthew jumped out the side window and ran home.

Earl was also with another man, looking tough. The window was broken so you could hear what they were talking about.

"There are people in there!! I just know it." Earl said.

"Probably just teenagers." a girl voice said.

"No, it can't be. I know it is the Butcher family" Earl said in a cranky voice.

"They are dead, Earl. Use common since." the tough guy said.

The door popped open and you could hear footprints on the hardwood floor.
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Old 05-11-2008, 10:53 AM   #22
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Old 05-11-2008, 08:58 PM   #23
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Danielle was mumbling, "This can't be. I just know it..."

"Know what?" Sarah said.

"Earl is dead. He died in prison, so it is his ghost. Go Now!!!"

So Sarah and Maggie jumped out the window.

Sorry for the short chapter, I am still coming up with ideas!
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Old 05-17-2008, 12:13 PM   #24
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Wow! Your story is so good! I absolutely LOVE ghost stories.
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Old 05-21-2008, 06:39 PM   #25
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This is pretty good! Are the boys still up in the attic 2? its kinda wierd how ghosts are hunting ghosts, but in a good way!
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Old 05-21-2008, 06:47 PM   #26
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This is very good!
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Old 05-21-2008, 07:51 PM   #27
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This is so good! When is there gonna be more?
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Old 05-21-2008, 10:00 PM   #28
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Good story! I like how it is suspenseful without being all out scary. On WI you have to make sure to watch for the younger viewers. Perfect balance here.
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Old 05-22-2008, 12:04 PM   #29
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Old 05-23-2008, 03:51 PM   #30
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OK, sorry I haven't been on here.

The next day, Sarah, Maggie, and Lauren went to the house, but only found a note in the attic. "Dear girls, we have moved for it is to dangerous for us to live here. To find us, look to the East and find where the bells ring. We're in the attic. From, Danielle, Jake, and Cody. "The old Beckham Church! I guess ghosts go for places that are "old"." Lauren said.

After having their lunch they packed, the girls hiked out to the Church. They were walking up the stairs when they heard a scream downstairs. Lauren and Sarah walked up and met with the Butchers while Maggie went to explore the scream. After about two hours, Maggie came up with someone else, a girl with a pet rat.
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