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Old 05-27-2008, 02:49 PM   #1
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Default Buh bye Sherman

This is a story I wrote on my old account. It broke and I couldn't get on.I want to keep it alive cause my cousin thinks it should be a children's book. Post your ideas. All rude comments will be handled through PM.

CH 1

"Sherman! Stop annoying Shelly!" Mother roared with anger.
"But Mom..."
"Don't you but me! Now stop bugging her this instance!"
"Sherman?" Father asked as he stepped into the kitchen.
"Ya Dad?" I asked forgetting all about Mom.
"Can you help me out in the shed?"
Father and I both knew that nothing was wrong with the shed. He was helping me.
"Sure Pa. Ma?"
"Just go." She sighed.
I soon as I got out from the house, I ran straight for the hill.
"Now be back around sun down. Ya hear me Sherman?" He yelled.
"Ya Dad!" I replied back.
"Now what time did Father said to be home?" I asked myself.
I ran up, down, up, down the hill.
I ran up the hill one more time. Than I tucked myself under my shell.
One push is all I need.
I gave one BIG push and closed my eyes.
Seconds passed so quick.
Minutes passed so quick.
Before ya know it, my journey ended.
I untucked myself from under my shell.
Where am I?
This isn't Shellville.
This isn't even close to being Shellville.
Where was I?

CH 2


Sherman shivered. It has been hours since he's been there. He has moved from the rock he stopped at, closer to the road.
"Maybe" He thought "Someone might see me and bring me to Shellville."
Now Sherman. Well. Sherman was what you called a "Creative Turtle." He used his mind as a "power" He would call it.
Every now and then, a car would speed down the road. He was too small to see you was driving.
But as soon as he gave up, and put down the stick he held to get drivers to pull over, a brown colored car stopped infront of Sherman.
He heard the engine turn off and some rumbling in the car.
"What's in there?" Sherman thought. Pictures of Geese showed up in his mind.
Just then a spotted colored bunny hopped out from his car. Then a light colored girl bunny hopped out after him.
"H-h-hello." Sherman stuttered.
"Hello." The girl bunny said.
"My name is Carrot and this is Nibbles." She said as she pointed to the spotted bunny.
"Hello Nibbles, hi Carrot." I murmured.
"Oh dear..." Carrot said as she hopped towards me. "Where do you live?" She asked as she tilted her head.
"Sh-Sh-Shell-Shellvi-" I said as my voice trailed off.
"Shellville?" Carrot asked still tilting her head.
I nodded.
"Oh dear." She said again now hopping around
.

CH 3

"Oh dear." Carrot said again as she began hopping around faster.
"Dear?" Nibbles said for the first time since he go out of the car."Are you alright?"
"NO I'M NOT ALRIGHT!" She screamed matter-of-factly. "WHY WOULDN'T I BE ALRIGHT?"
"WE HAVE TO GO TO SHELLVILLE TO DROP OFF THIS LITTLE CUTIE AND THAT'S 23 DAYS AWAY!"
"DO YOU THINK I AM ALRIGHT?" She questioned while she began pacing.
"I-I don't have to go home right away." I blurted.
"Dear. This isn't about you. We are just worried how to get you home." She said more calm.
"How bout he stays with us until we find his parents?" Asked Nibbles.
"How will you like that Sweety?" Asked Carrot as she smiled at me.
"Okay." I said grimly as I stared down at the ground.
"By the way" Sherman asked. "Where are we?"
"Oh Sweety, we are in BunnyTown. Home of the Bunnies.But stay out of RabVille. Those Rabbits are just terrible." Stated Carrot.









---------- Samantha..Mae added 204 Minutes and 50 Seconds later ----------

Anyone? Sherman sad.

Last edited by Samantha..Mae; 05-27-2008 at 02:49 PM.. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
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Old 05-27-2008, 03:23 PM   #2
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Default Re: Buh bye Sherman

I like it! And so far, it would make a great childrens book, like your cousin said!
Old 05-27-2008, 03:56 PM   #3
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Default Re: Buh bye Sherman

Thanx. I thought I wrote CH 4 along time ago. Ill go check.
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