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Old 09-21-2010, 06:21 PM   #1
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Here I will be posting my new book. It is called The Best Place to be is...

My chapters are really short, only 5- 6 paragraphs long.
If you want to know the answer to the title, you have to read until the very end.

I should post a new chapter once a week.

Now, for the book.

The Best Place to be is...
Chapter one

Walking down the halls of Melbourne High School was difficult. The crowded hallways squeezed closer together as students went opposite ways.
All though I, Peyton Chambers, was already at my own top locker, I could feel the backpacks and arms moving behinf my back. The chatter sounded like chaos to me. But to others, it sounded like the life og cuommunication, because it was!
First period, my favorite place to be at during school, would start in five minutes. So i shut my locker(trying not to hit the person below me), and moved with the flow of the blob. At the end of the hallway, I saw my best friend standing there, waiting for the crowd to walk by.
I slid off to my left, joining him with a smile. "Hey Jason," I said looking at his gleaming brown eyes. I knew by face was red, but I was used to it. My cheeks were always red when I was able to see him.
Me and Jason have known eachother since kindergarden, eleven years. We first taled to eachother while swinging side-by-side. I was talking to my older sister, Kayla, about the Greek Gods, because it was something I loved.
"Athena, goddes of wisdom, my favorite," I told her while looking at the sky.
"You know Athena and Posideon(her favorite god) are siblings." I knew she was joking. But she could have joked anyone.
" No they arent," I heard a young boy's voice say. I looked to my right, and there he was. A young black haired boy in an O'Rielly t-shirt and maroon basketball shorts.
The rest of my day was consisted of talking to Jason about the Big Three- Zeus, Posideon, and Hades. All the stuff after that, was my most prized memory.


END OF CHAPTER 1!

Chapter 2
So as we walked down the 10th grade hallway, we talked about the future. I really have no idea about how we got to that topic.We got to the part of our marriage, but we both hesitated, and walked in silence for a while.
The silence was broken by his voice, "we'll come back to that later."
As soon as we walked into the band room, I immediatley relized Rebecca, my best friend and most awesomest flute player, wasn't at school
Today we were taking a playing quiz on the E major scale. I was nervous like the rest of the class. I mean who wouldn't be nervous about playing in front of 50 people? But evry time I look at Jason, he sees my expression and tells me, "you'll do fine. You know you're good, and so do I.
Once Mr.Wiston said my name, i froze, becoming a solid rock. Jason tapped me on the shoulder and I put my mouth to my flute. The note came out perfectly, but I was still tense.
When I finished, I put the flute in my lap and listened to the round of applause. Index fingers pointed me and gave thumbs up. But in a minute, my fame was gone.
Jason was called on next. He looked at me for support, and i nodded. He picked up his gold trombone and pressed the mouth piece to his lips.

END OF CHAPTER 2!


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Old 09-21-2010, 06:29 PM   #2
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This is great, keep writing!
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Old 09-21-2010, 06:30 PM   #3
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This is great, keep writing!
Thanks! I just thought of writing it this morning!
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Old 09-21-2010, 08:35 PM   #4
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That's really good!
I started writing a HP fan-fic, that i might post on here when I'm done (if it doesn't get to.. er.. mature
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Old 09-21-2010, 08:54 PM   #5
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I love it! But can it be in some other color than lime green? I could barely read it
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Old 09-22-2010, 06:16 AM   #6
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I love it! But can it be in some other color than lime green? I could barely read it
Sure, let me change it.
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Old 09-22-2010, 08:18 AM   #7
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I love it cait! keep going.
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Old 09-22-2010, 03:30 PM   #8
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I love it cait! keep going.
Thanks Nicci!!!!
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Old 09-23-2010, 06:36 PM   #9
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Who is this Kayla character? A friend of yours or me?
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Old 09-23-2010, 06:39 PM   #10
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Who is this Kayla character? A friend of yours or me?
Kayla? Oh that Kayla, she and here sisters come in at the climax point.(late chapter 3 or early chapter 4)
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