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Old 08-19-2010, 07:42 PM   #1
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Default Berrymist Chapter One (A warriors book).

Chapter one

Berrymist ran down the path into Oceanclan. It was late, all cats were asleep in their dens except two.. Echostorm and Berrymist. As he reached the clearing of Oceanclan, their he saw her, looking very pretty as could be. "Hello.." he panted, out of breath. "Hi!" she nuzzled him happily. "Are you ready?" Ready... echoed in Berrymist's mind.. Ready to leave the clans forever? Not really.. but it was to be with pretty, gentle, Echostorm. "Echostorm... I don't know.."
"But it would be so much fun! We could be together.. forever.. Think of that!"
"I am, and don't know about it... I mean.. No more Sandpaw, my apprentice. She needs me, you know!" "Yeah..but..."
"No, I'm not leaving. I can't.. What if you joined MistyClan? It would be perfect!"
"No.. I would be called a traitor! Gosh, your so selfish! You know what, Berrymist? We're done!"
Berrymist snarled in dismay. "Fine! Go find another tom!"

Berrymist fled in horrid. His love of his life called him selfish.. and then left him. "Well maybe Frostfeather.. she's the prettiest in Mistyclan.. besides our leader, Ivorystar.. but she's taken. He sighed.. "Oh starclan," he mumbled.. "please find love for me!"
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Old 08-19-2010, 08:49 PM   #2
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Default Re: Berrymist Chapter One (A warriors book).

Nice start
Can't wait for the second chapter.
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Old 08-20-2010, 03:49 PM   #3
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Default Re: Berrymist Chapter One (A warriors book).

Hopefully I'll write more soon.. Haven't been writing alot lately. Not as good as usual... :-/
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Old 08-20-2010, 04:22 PM   #4
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Nice start! You should continue!
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Old 08-20-2010, 07:08 PM   #5
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Default Re: Berrymist Chapter One (A warriors book).

Thanks Collie . I hope I will!!
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Old 08-21-2010, 05:56 PM   #6
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you said berrymist fled in horrid instead of horror
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Old 08-21-2010, 10:42 PM   #7
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i really luv ur story! can u let me know when a new chapter is out? thanks!!
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Old 08-22-2010, 10:52 AM   #8
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wow! I love it! I'll stay around for the next chapter!
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