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Old 12-07-2010, 05:13 PM   #1
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About: All 13 year old Makala wanted was a younger sister, all 5 year old Emma wanted was and older sister. But theres too many problems that it would be nearly impossible to be sisters. one, Makala can't talk, two, they never actually spent time together, three, they are orphans, four, Emma has already adopted. Join them both as they tell there story.

NOTE: This story will be in 3 points of view, Makala's, Emma's, and the authors. I wanted to show some detail but I couldn't when the story was beeing told in their points of view, the chapter will say who is telling the story.


Chapter 1 (Makala & Emma)
All I ever wanted was a sister. A little sister to be exact. But with the challenges that life has given me, I can not. First off, I'm an orphan. A lonley orphan too. Second, I'm 13, thats right 13. Most parents are looking for toddlers and newborns, not teenagers. Third, I can't talk. From the looks of me, I'm normal, I can see and hear perfectly fine, but some sort of brain tumor I had when I was just 3 months old enabled me to talk. So here I am, sitting on my bed with nothing to do but read.

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I feel bad for Makala. Though so beautiful in the front, she is silent. Her Long brown hair is always shiney and clean, her eyes are a beautiful blue, her teeth are as streight as they can get, and she's smart. I wish I could have her as an older sister, but then I would be scared that we wouldn't get along. I'm scared that because she is silent, we wouldn't be friends. I never actually spoke to her..or as I should say, interacted with her. She's just always in her room sitting alone and reading a book. I just know somehow she would be a great older sister, although I know it would never happen. I'm 5 years old and I have already been adopted. I leave in 3 days...

Chapter 2 (Makala & Emma)
People call me names all the time. I never actually thought much about it, I just walked away from it. But when Kyle Layer started calling me "a dumb bookworm" I got upset. You can call me bookworm, or quiet loser, or anything else, but you can not call me dumb. I wish I could have defended myself with words but of course I couldn't. What did happen was quite a blur. It started with me kicking him in the leg, and him kicking back, than before you know it I have a black eye, and he has a sprained ankle.
Kyle avoided me after that, and I was glad he did.

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I never knew Makala strong. I always thought of her as weak, you never really see her outside of her room. Every once in a while she'll go in the back of the orphanage and read in the grass while leaning on an old tree. I see her get picked on a lot but it didn't seem to bother her...or at least until Kyle Laser called her a dumb bookworm. They got into this massive fight
"What are ya going to do about it"
of course she said nothing, but she did kick.
Makala got out with a black eye, but poor Kyle sprained his ankle.
Ever since than I respected her, and so did everyone else.

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Old 12-07-2010, 05:14 PM   #2
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Old 12-08-2010, 07:45 PM   #3
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Wow, Makala kicked the guy?
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Wow, Makala kicked the guy?
Not the way your thinking but she kicked him, I'm not done editing it and all, it's not very detailed
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