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Old 02-08-2011, 05:45 PM   #1
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The Outcast ♥
By: Emily (Chihuahua23)

Chapter 1: A New Town
I heard a loud scream as my eyes flew open. My iPod had somehow turned on while I was asleep. I quickly shut it off and stretched my arms. "Morning Sunshine," my dad said and laughed. He knew i hated that name. I looked out the window and groaned. We were still driving. "Dont worry we're almost there sweety," my mom responded. Once again, another name I had great hatred toward. I glared at my mother and glanced back out the window. "Welcome To Bayfield" read a sign. Gross, I thought to myself. What person names a town Bayfield?! Great I'm talking to myself to ease my nerves. I'll admit I was VERY nervous about school. I wasn't the girl to really "fit in". But at least I had friends back home. Suddenly the car stopped.
"We're here!" yelled my brother excitedly. I slumped out of the car and looked at our house. A one story house with beige walls? NOT my type of color. Maybe my teacher was right, procrastination IS my thing. I laughed at that thought. Suddenly my brother grabbed my hand and I was jolted inside. "Jeremy you almost made me trip!" I yelled frustrated at him. Of course he thought that was hilarious and he ran off to who knows where.
I spent the rest of the day looking around at all the empty rooms. The entire house smelled like rotten garbage and fish heads. Of course my mom thought it would be a great idea to put out scented candles. Oh how I love sarcasm. Eventually the smells mixed and made everyone nauseus. So we spent the entire night on ONE, yes ONE matress in the basement. Talk about torture, and did I mention my brother isn't potty-trained? Sometimes I think life just likes to kick me around.

Chapter 2: First Day Of School
My alarm clock blasted into my ears. I swung out of bed and slipped on my Jeremy's toy truck. "OOWWWW!!!!" I screamed as a fell to the floor. Great beginning to my day. I quickly got ready and put on my eyeliner and makeup. It was quite hard considering I was shaking from nerves half the time. I ran down stares and grabbed a muffin off the table. "Thanks mom!" I yelled walking out the door. I never took the bus. they were dirty and had people i hate on them...

Skipping down the street I hummed my favorite songs. After a while of walking I eventually got to the school parking lot. I looked up."Whoa...," I mumbled. The school was HUGE. I gulped and slowly walked inside. Bunches of students were running around hugging each other and screaming. Great... I though to myself. Another preppy grade of pure torture.

More to Chapter 2 will be posted soon

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Old 02-08-2011, 06:37 PM   #2
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Nice start, you should probably make your chapters a bit longer since it gets overwhelming if you have like 56776. So for Chapter 2 just split it into however many parts you need.

Nice story though, I'll be looking into it
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Old 02-08-2011, 11:43 PM   #3
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It's sounding good so far (:
I'll be watching for more.
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Old 02-09-2011, 07:48 AM   #4
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thanks you guys! new chapter will be up later today i promise
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Old 02-09-2011, 05:24 PM   #5
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cool story.. i'll await more
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Old 02-09-2011, 06:06 PM   #6
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1/3 of chapter 2 has been posted
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Old 02-09-2011, 11:22 PM   #7
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Good =)
But she's kinda negative... about everything
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Old 02-10-2011, 07:34 AM   #8
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haha the character is kind of based off of me although i have never moved before. u could say im a "little" pessimistic.
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Old 02-10-2011, 07:36 AM   #9
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ooh.. can't wait for more of chapter 2.. good job
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Old 02-10-2011, 09:45 AM   #10
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Very, very nice story! It's captivating! Keep on writing!
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