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Old 02-11-2012, 09:41 PM   #1
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Default ∆ Life ∆ What happens when four words will bring your life to a halt? Join one girl in her struggle to remove the chains of the past.

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My breath fogged the glass as I stared at the snow covered driveway out the window of our two-story house. Snow swirled gracefully outside, each intricate flake tumbling down only to pile up and create something both big and a bother to our family.

The phone rang downstairs, and I heard my mother digging around between the couch cushions to find it. The dogs yipped and yapped, excited by the alien noise. No one ever called our lonely house, only my dad when he had the turn. I crept downstairs, excitement registered on my face. It had to be daddy, had to be him- who else could it be?

My mom answered the cordless with a simple, "Hello?" Her pretty face portrayed her excitement as she awaited an answer. All at once, her expression changed. Shock, and sadness. I was confused, what could be wrong- it was daddy, wasn't it? The bulky phone slipped out of her long fingers, hitting the hardwood floor with an earsplitting crack as the battery casing broke away from the main piece. My mother's knees crumpled beneath her, her figure pale.

I stifled a scream, bounding down the remaining carpeted stairs. I grabbed my mom's hand, and her face met mine. Clear tears welled up beneath her dark lashes, a dark flush spreading across her high cheek bones. Her next four words brought my world crumbling down. "Daddy's not coming home."

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Old 02-11-2012, 09:54 PM   #2
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Aww what happened? Awesome story!
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Old 02-11-2012, 09:58 PM   #3
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Default Re: ∆ Life ∆ What happens when four words will bring your life to a halt? Join one girl in her struggle to remove the chains of the past.

I like it so far! Are you going to have a VM list?.... if so.... add me to it!
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Old 02-11-2012, 10:01 PM   #4
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Aww what happened? Awesome story!

Thank you
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Will do!
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Old 02-11-2012, 10:09 PM   #5
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Default Re: ∆ Life ∆ What happens when four words will bring your life to a halt? Join one girl in her struggle to remove the chains of the past.

Nice start, Minteh~
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Old 02-11-2012, 10:32 PM   #6
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As you guessed...I'm interested! VM list, please!
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Old 02-11-2012, 10:51 PM   #7
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vm list pleasseee
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Old 02-12-2012, 12:02 AM   #8
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Great prologue! Please add me to the VM list!
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Old 02-12-2012, 12:13 AM   #9
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Old 02-12-2012, 12:37 AM   #10
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View Post Originally Posted by starwartwilight
Nice start, Minteh~
Thank you Carilina.
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As you guessed...I'm interested! VM list, please!
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vm list pleasseee
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