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Old 05-20-2008, 07:36 PM   #1
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I'm guessing that most of you have a dad right? Well, mine tends not to be around all that much.
This is the story of a girl who unexpectedly lost her Dad, like the title says, it is sad. I hope that you can enjoy it though.
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Bye Dad.
The bells chimed in a strange, but somewhat familiar tone,
Ding. Ding. Ding. I stood and watched as a big black car pulled up beside the church. Not but three hours before that, I was home with my dad. We were playing a game of Monopoly. A friend called that day, a Thursday night. I ran upstairs talking to Sofia about homework and boys. I came down about ten minutes later. The Monopoly game was still out. I called for my Dad. No answer. I called again. Nothing. The sound of the great Grandfather clock filled the soundless room. Tick. Tick. Tick. Then I saw Dad. He was lying on the floor. He wasn’t breathing. I leaned my head next to where his heart was. Nothing.

As fast as I could I ran into the kitchen, and dialed 911.
A lady told me that there would be someone right there. I then called my mom. No answer. She was in a meeting. I started sobbing as the distant sound of sirens grew closer and closer. Then from the living room I heard a noise. “Krista…” I ran and looked at my dad who was barely breathing. “It’ll be okay Dad!” I said between sobs. He smiled. Then he said the last words I would ever hear him say. “Krista…I love you.” I began screaming frantically as the paramedics began kicking down the door. “Dad I love you too!!!” I said. And then, he died. There, in my arms. There would be no more games with the sprinkler. No more cool gifts from cool places. No more Thursday Monopoly. I would hate that game.

Within an hour, we were getting ready for the funeral. I was standing there wearing the dress I had worn when my Grandmother passed away. I heard the sound of the bells. I began to cry again. I just wished I had had one more second. Just enough time to say ‘Bye Dad.’
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Old 05-20-2008, 08:08 PM   #2
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oh that story is so sad! its great writing though!
Old 05-20-2008, 09:41 PM   #3
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omg

is this true?!
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Old 05-20-2008, 09:51 PM   #4
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Wow, that almost made me cry! That was terrific! Very sad, deep, descriptive..

Keep up the awesome work.
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Old 05-21-2008, 06:46 AM   #5
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That story was one of the saddest stories ever!


And I spilt my orange juice.
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Old 05-21-2008, 09:20 AM   #6
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omg.... i have tears in my eyes.
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Old 05-21-2008, 06:16 PM   #7
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Thank you for the compliments. I appreciate them lol W_L...
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Old 05-21-2008, 06:27 PM   #8
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OMG! Now I have tears in my eyes.
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Old 05-22-2008, 03:59 PM   #9
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I'm sorry jojo...
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Old 05-22-2008, 04:43 PM   #10
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Oh, that's sad! I almost cried!!
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