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Old 07-20-2009, 05:19 PM   #51
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It was 3:30 and there was a great RING. Finally summer vacation is here! We said good-bye to our teachers and they gave all of us a hot dog and said eat it while it's hot! When I got home my parents and sisters were all packed
for a family vacation. The ride was long so I ate the hot dog on the way there ( well there goes supper). I kept saying to myself, this will be the best vacation we will have, except all we've packed was an aardvark who ate half the bottle of sunscreen. So turned out we had to buy our own swimsuit. While I was there I saw the aardvark taking a bite out of all the surfboards there. I told the owner that it added a cool design but he didn't get fooled by it. So I had to buy all of the surfboards. You might think that this is the worst vacation ever but the best part was that all the surfboards that I bought were enough for the whole family to surf on. So instead of the worst vacation ever, it was the best vacation ever!
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Old 07-20-2009, 05:32 PM   #52
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It was one of those days when you wanted to live in an ice cube. Tommy the aardvark was sweating so much! No matter how much lemonade he bought he was still just so hot! All of the lemonade salesmen were making a fortune of him.
He suddenly had an idea. he would go to the pool. of course, why didn't he think of it before!
The community pool was known as the most cold pool in all of webkinz world.
Tommy dropped his lemonade and ran home to get his swimsuit. But wait, he didn't have a swimsuit! He would have to run to the wshop and get one.
After he got his swimsuit he went home to have lunch. Hot dogs and fruit juice, his favorite. Tommy gobbled his lunch in a few bites then went to get ready for the pool.
After he put his swimsuit on and applied sunscreen he was ready to go to the pool.
As soon as he saw the pool his heart skipped a beat. He hopped into the water and felt so refreshed.
The lifeguard blew a whistle. " no surfboards in the pool!", he said.
Tommy chuckled as Bob the horse took hes pink surfboard out of the pool.
This day was so perfect until it started to rain.
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Old 07-20-2009, 05:44 PM   #53
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It was the last day of summer vacation, and Jimmy decided to got to the beach. His whole summer had been boring, or at least he thought so. His sister, Jan, asked if she could go, and Jimmy said, “Sure, but before you can come, you must find an aardvark and bring it to me.” Jimmy couldn’t help but laugh at this silly request. It was impossible, since they lived in Upstate New York. Jan smiled. “Alright, I will!” Jimmy stared at his younger sister in amazement, but then said to himself, “she’s too dumb to know where aardvarks live,” and walked upstairs to his room. Jan also walked up to her room and started gathering her stuff.
Jimmy yelled to his sister, “I’M LEAVING!” Jan ran downstairs and yelled back, “Me too!” Jimmy stared at her-again. “Are you really THAT dumb?” Jan smiled at him-again. “What do you mean?” They both left and retrieved their bikes from the garage.
When Jimmy arrived at the beach, he took his towel out of the basket on his bicycle, waved it in the air, and then laid it flat on the sand. He put his sunscreen on and went to the concession stand to buy a hot dog. Jimmy brought the hot dog back to his reserved spot on the beach. He was taking his second bite, when suddenly a familiar voice called his name. “JIMMY! JIMMY! JIMMY, I FOUND IT! I FOUND IT!” Jimmy spit out the hot dog . There was his sister, in her blue and green nautical one-piece swimsuit, waving him down. There was a red surfboard with a yellow stripe running through it resting on her shoulder, and she had a huge grin across her face. Jimmy just sat there, his mouth in an “O” shape, in total awe. Jan motioned for him to come to her, and he obeyed.
Behind the surfboard, a full-grown aardvark was standing in the sand. It looked scared and nervous as it stared up at Jimmy, and suddenly he felt bad for some odd reason. He shook his head, as if to shake that feeling out, but he couldn’t. “Where…” Jimmy started to say. After a few seconds, when Jan knew he was finished speaking, she said, “The zoo, of course! Where else can you get an aardvark in New York?” Jimmy looked nervous. “We have to get her back.” Jan laughed. “Well, certainly! It’s not like we’re keeping it as a pet or anything. But anyway…can I go to the beach now?” Jimmy kept staring at the aardvark. “Sure…sure. I’ll be right back.” Jimmy grabbed the aardvark and put in the basket of the bike. “Wait…where are you going?” Jimmy didn’t hear Jan, he didn’t bother. All that mattered was getting this poor aardvark back to the zoo.
When Jimmy got to the zoo, he found that it was closed. A sign on the gate said, “SEARCHING FOR LOST ANIMAL. BE CAUTIOUS.” He saw a zookeeper near the gate, and yelled, “HEY! UH…EXCUSE ME!” The zookeeper turned to face him. Her face was wet with tears. “Y…Yes?” “I…I think I have your lost animal.” The zookeeper rushed to the gate and unlocked it. She burst into tears again when she saw the aardvark, and quickly took it from Jimmy’s arms. “Thank you,” she said, and closed the gate. You could tell she really meant it, and so much more.
As Jimmy got back onto his bicycle, he could hear the woman exclaiming, “I FOUND HER! I FOUND HER! EVERYONE, I FOUND MARTIE!” Jimmy smiled, and rode back to the beach. And as he was riding along the sidewalk, he said to himself, “I think this was the best summer ever.” You could tell he really meant it, and so much more.

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Hailey the aardvark was a very energetic animal. She loved to play, and could never sit still in school. One day she was in her wooden seat, almost jumping out of it as summer drew nearer. It was the last day of school and the seconds ticked by slowly, she was watching the clock eagerly. Finally, the moment she had been waiting for came and the loud school bell rang as she hopped out of her seat and raced home.

"Well look who's an eager beaver?" her mother said as Hailey came in the door, panting. She slung her backpack down and ran over to her mother, wrapping her in a large hug.

"Can we go to the beach now? Huh?" she asked.

Her mother nodded and smiled. "Go get your stuff," she said. Hailey was already running to her room. "Don't forget the sunscreen!" she called.

"Yeah, yeah," Hailey said as she threw her stuff together. She put her swimsuit on quickly. It was a two-piece tankini that was an ocean blue with neon flowers on the side. She smiled to herself and picked it all up, running to the door. "Come on!" she called to her mother as they headed towards the beach.

"Did you put sunscreen on?" her mother, Ruby, asked.

"Mm-hmm," Hailey said absent-mindedly as she tried to see over all of her sandtoys and towel.

They got to the beach which was very crowded and chose a spot near the ocean. Hailey threw all of her stuff down and ran to the foamy ocean. She swam and found one of her friends, Sandy the Golden Retriever, and they passed the beach ball back and forth. Later, they built a sand castle that towered over the two. Then they pushed it over and made another one even bigger.

Then they went to get a hot dog. Hailey peeked over the tall counter. "Two hotdogs please," she said. The basset hound at the stand gave them the hotdogs and then went back to his work. Hailey smiled and took a huge bite. "Oh yuck!" she said. "It's full of sand!" She threw it away and sighed, then went back to playing with sandy.

Suddenly, her mom called her. It was getting late and it was time to go. Hailey was laying on the sand under the hot sun and looked over at her mom. Hailey was all pink and it hurt to move. But she got up anyways.

Sunny the penguin came along carrying his surfboard. "Surf's up girls!" he called as he turned to run out to the waves. His surf board swung tough and hit Hailey right in the head! Poor Hailey tripped and got a mouthful of sand.

Hailey got up and started walking back to her mom slowly. Her sunburn hurt a lot, she had been rushing so much that she had forgotten her sunscreen.

Her mom smiled at her and they headed home. Hailey watched out the window. Hopefully tomorrow she would have better luck, and it turned out she had the best summer of her life. Yay Hailey!
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Old 07-20-2009, 06:17 PM   #55
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You see, I love surfing and the whole time I was packing my suitcase, all I could think about was swimming, campfires, and surfing. I was going to Summer Celebration Camp! There was no need for a surfboard at that camp, but I was still really excited. When I got there, I was really dissapointed. It was everything but worth celebrating. It was rainy and there was an aardvark in the cabin! After we got the aardvark out, I realized just how boring and bland the cabin was. The beds were as bumpy as a country road, and the walls were as colorless as dirt. I fixed the bumpy bed problem by putting my air mattress on top of it. Turns out, everyone in my cabin brought their air mattresses. My cabin members and I spent the rainy day drawing colorful pictures to put on the walls. The next day was bright, sunny, and perfect for swimming! There was a slight difficulty, though. I remembered my sunscreen, but I forgot my swimsuit! I was about to call my mom, when our camp directer came into the cabin with my swimsuit!! My mom dropped it off as soon as she noticed I'd left without it. I thanked her and hurried to the restrooms to change. After a few hours of marco polo and submarine tag, it was time for supper. There were hamburgers, hotdogs, chips, soda, cookies, anything that you could imagine was there! I had a hotdog, chips, a cookie, and some soda. Yum!! After that, we had s'mores and told ghost stories around the campfire. The perfect ending, to the perfect first day of camp. Five days later, we had to go home. There were a lot of tears and hugs. I'm super excited to go to Summer Celebration Camp next year! Hopefully, I don't forget anything!
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Old 07-20-2009, 06:20 PM   #56
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My Parent's announced it was time for our summer vacation. I got out my biggest suitcase, I packed it up with my surfboard, swimsuit, sunscreen, my aardvark stuffed animal and a few T-shirts and shorts. I even gave my mom some coupons for my favorite hot dogs. ecause we usually go to the beach and have a bomb fire and roast wiennies and make smores. I was so excited, I said my good-byes to my best friends. Then my mom looked at me and said "honey, I hope you packed your good sweaters and pants". We are going to Aulstralia for vacation and it is winter there! I was a bit bummed, but I promissed my koala webkin I would bring him back a postcard. We had a blast in the "outback". I saw some real kangaroos and koala bears at a nature preserve there.
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Old 07-20-2009, 06:38 PM   #57
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One day Sally the aardvark got out of bed and said, "Only if right now I could be in a swimsuit, at the beach, while eating a hotdog." So Sally begged her mother to take her and her friend Baily, to the beach. As they got in the car they put on their put on there sunscreen. When they got board on their way there they played games like, rock, paper, scissors. Or games like Category. After the long car ride they were at the beach. They ran out of the car excitedly, and grabbed their surf boards. They surf boarded for an hour then finally got tired. Sally and Baily got hungry so they ate some hotdogs. Later they built sandcastles, swam, tanned, dug a big hole, and finally were wore out again. They left the beach and went home. When they got home they relaized something. They realized they forgot to take Sally's brother to the beach!
That day the Aardvark family promised to never again forget someone when they go to the beach. By the way, I'm Sally the aardvark!
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Good afternoon listeners, this is JLHaffner reporting live with a News Break, from Kinztona Beach. I have interrupted your scheduled kinz tunes, because here at Kinztona Beach things have gotten, well, mmm... a bit strange in a very unique way. Picture this, the sun is shinning brightly in the clear sky, it is 93 degrees and the UV rays are strong . So remember your sunscreen if headed out today. Now, you may be asking yourselves "why would I be interrupting for a good weather report". I have that answer for you. I am sure you can hear the kinz' here having a great time, whether they are having a picnic and playing on the beach, or splashing in the waters edge and riding the waves. Now for the odd portion of this news break, we have an aardvark couple here today, yes I said aardvark. His name is Bugz Zapper and his lovely wife is Antie Zapper. Mrs. Zapper is selling the latest fashion in new swimsuits in a nearby cabana. Mr. Zapper is wearing it, the mens one piece swimsuit. You got it, straight from the island of Varksland, trunks with an attached tank top, to help block those bad UV rays. However it's Mr. Zapper, that I wish you could all see. He is selling hot dogs! What's special about hot dogs you ask. Well, the fact that he is in the water, on his hot dog shaped surfboard selling hot dogs to surfers while he is surfing! This is amazing because Mr. Zapper can manage this without a single hot dog getting wet. And finally before returning you to your kinz tunes, I must say: Grab your swimsuit, some sunscreen, and your surfboard and head on down here to Kinztona Beach. Have some fun in the sun, grab a wave, meet Mr. Zapper the surfing aardvark and buy a soon to be famous "Zapper's Surfin' Hot Dogs". Hope to see you all here today, this is JLHaffner signing off, have a kinztastically great day.
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Old 07-20-2009, 07:07 PM   #59
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“Look out Henry!” I heard my best friend, Allen, cry after me but it was too late. My surfboard flew out beneath my trotters. And I began sinking into the underworld of Lake Pagose’. While sinking I began trying to figure out why I didn’t need to breath underwater. I figured it was probably because I was told I was a “super pig” by my mother. So I kept sinking and sinking until I began seeing this blurry image of a golden building below. Once I got closer I could tell it was a building, but not JUST a building but a whole town of Aardvarks! I was so excited and couldn’t wait to tell Allen, since he is an Aardvark himself and has not seen many of his kind before. Just as my trotters touched the ground my sunscreen began melting away and my swimsuit turned in to a golden suit with a polka dotted tie. I was fine looking pig I must say myself, but I couldn’t tell what in the webkinz world was going on! But I finally figured it out after seeing the golden building was titled “Mestronde La’ Poges” which is a VERY fancy restaurant in Webkinz World. It all made since, the reason I could breathe in this water is because its magical water, water that would set your clothes to the occasion that is going on! I figured I should probably go to “Mestronde La’ Poges” and get something to eat since my stomach was growling louder the Allen’s snores. I stood in the door way of the restaurant and was asked “what was a pig like me doing in their town of Aardvarks.”After telling them my story they replied “Oh my! You must be starved!” 6 seconds later exactly , I was sitting in the same booth with the Aardvark who question my being there. After talking with each other for a whopping 45minutes, I figured out her name was Sandy, she was the princess of Alasrism ( which is where I was now), and I was going to be escorted back to dry land very soon. After eating my hotdog (which was made out of jelly), I was full out of my mind so I decided to skip dessert and I went out of the restaurant with Sandy, sat on a bench, and waited to be escorted back to Lake Pagose. While sitting Sandy leaned over and whispered “Don’t tell a single soul about the existence of Alasrism.” And with that an odd car/submarine pulled up and I was told it was time to leave. I got into the vehicle and my fancy suit and tie turned into my old swimsuit and my sunscreen reappeared . When we reached the dry land Allen was eating 2 mountain high scoops of ice-cream, but as soon as he saw me he dropped his dessert and began running to me. Once he finally reached me he began asking my A LOT of question so to answer his question without tell a HUGE secret I replied “ I was at a very wonderful place,” And with that, all of his question stopped coming and he replied “ I know what you mean! I get that same feeling every time I get myself some ice-cream.” Even though I knew he would never understand.
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Old 07-20-2009, 07:25 PM   #60
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I have 1 quick question, is it alright to illustrate with screen shots of our webbies? Will that count against the number of words allowed, or is it forbidden?
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